Constructive Criticism
Guest post by Edward Sisson
With all the praise or criticism of the portrayals in TV and movies of Jane’s characters (and I’ve done my share of that), I wonder if readers might venture a little criticism of Jane herself (gasp) when it comes to her wonderful characters. Are there any moments in the books where you think Jane herself put a foot wrong, or struck a false note? I’m not talking about a character like Emma, who is supposed to have many faults, but a featured, good character who exhibits a trait Jane ought not to have included, or a moment that feels too contrived.
I can offer only one: Anne Elliot in Persuasion, in her visit with Mrs. Smith where Mrs. Smith discloses Mr. Elliot’s true character. They get to the subject of Mr. Elliot’s first (and at that point only) wife, and Anne comments “But was she not a very low woman?” and Mrs. Smith responds “Her father was a grazier, her grandfather had been a butcher.” And Anne does not make any comment to the effect that the woman’s father and grandfather ought not be the determinants of the woman’s own quality. This kind of snobbery, while very common in the day, does not strike me as true to Anne’s character. This exchange is included in the 1971 BBC production, but not in the 1995 movie.
A somewhat similar idea is to identify moments of behavior by some of the less-favorable characters that show a surprising good quality. What I am thinking of is the moment in Pride & Prejudice at the Netherfield Ball when Caroline Bingley cautions Elizabeth against Wickham, and Eliza brushes her off as the comment being merely snobbery about low birth, and Caroline recoiling and saying “it was kindly meant.” In the book I think this probably was not “kindly meant,” because Caroline approaches with “civil disdain,” and after her rebuff turns away with a “sneer.” But as played in the 1985 (8 not 9) BBC version (my favorite), Caroline is genuinely hurt at the rebuff, and it appears that her caution really was “kindly meant.” I’ve always liked that bit of complexity, of sprinkling in a little bit of good into a “bad” character.
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